孙平凡科长

3月11日晚，浙江利群律师事务所业务学习如期举行。本次学习我们很荣幸的邀请到路桥区司法局基层科科长孙平凡主讲。孙科长围绕《写论文的关键在选题》展开讲解，并结合经验分析了法学论文的构成要素及各部分的写作要点，共有30余名律师到场参加了本次学习。

1、目前法学论文常见的问题

问题概要

△文题偏大，中心不突出；

△经验不突出，观点不明确；

△叙事多，堆积材料多，缺乏理性思考；

△结构不严谨，层次不清晰。

2、撰写法学论文的一般步骤

△用心选题       △收集材料      △提炼观点     △起草论文      △文章修改

基本结构

△前置部分：标题、作者、内容提要（中英文）、关键词

△主体部分：引言、正文、结论

△后置部分：附录、参考文献、日期、致谢等

要点分析

标题——文章的眉目

△准确

△简炼

△醒目

选题原则

1.学术价值 2.社会急需 3.量力而行 4.选题有新意 5.有问题意识

内容提要——全文内容的缩影

△内容完整

△重点突出

△文字简短

△陈述客观

关键词

△对表述论文的中心内容有实质意义的词汇

正文

△常见为三段式结构

提出问题-——分析问题——解决问题

（绪论）      （正文）      （结论）

注释及参考文献

一篇论文少于五十个注释我是不看的。——胡建淼

列出注释及参考文献的重要性：

△可初步判断该论文的水平以及作者对有关学科的背景知识水平；

△可以初步判断作者的道德水平。参考文献关系到论文的可信度和作者的声誉。

文章修改

△中心是否突出

△结构是否合理

△语言是否流畅

3、总结

选题是写论文的关键

材料是写论文的基础

观点是论文的灵魂

文字是论文的外在表现

课堂建议

每年精读30篇原文，100篇摘要

古人云：“言之无文，行而不远”，在竞争激烈的法律行业，写作是律师的重要“兵器”，是律师才华的最好展示，所以，各位律师在注重口才训练的同时千万不要忽视写作能力的培养噢，动动手指写起来吧！

Section Chief Sun Pingfan

On the evening of March 11, the business study of Zhejiang Liqun Law Firm was held as scheduled. We are honored to invite Sun Pingfan, Chief of the Grassroots Section of the Judicial Bureau of Luqiao District, to give a lecture in this study. Section Chief Sun explained "The key to writing a thesis lies in choosing a topic", and analyzed the elements of a legal thesis and the writing points of each part based on experience. A total of more than 30 lawyers participated in this study.

1. Common problems in current law papers

Problem summary

△The title of the article is too large, and the center is not prominent;

△The experience is not outstanding and the viewpoint is not clear;

△There are too many narratives, a lot of accumulated materials, and a lack of rational thinking;

△The structure is not rigorous and the hierarchy is not clear.

2. General steps in writing a legal thesis

△Choose topics carefully △Collect materials △Refine opinions △Draft papers △Edit articles

basic structure

△Pre-part: title, author, content summary (Chinese and English), keywords

△Main part: introduction, body, conclusion

△ Post part: appendices, references, dates, acknowledgments, etc.

Analysis

Title - the outline of the article

△ Accurate

△ concise

△ eye-catching

Principles of topic selection

1. Academic value 2. Urgent social needs 3. Act according to one's ability 4. The topic selection is innovative 5. Problem-aware

Executive summary - the epitome of the full text content

△The content is complete

△ Focused

△ short text

△Statement objective

Key words

△Words that have substantial meaning for expressing the central content of the paper

text

△ Common three-stage structure

Ask questions——Analyze problems——Solve problems

(Introduction) (Text) (Conclusion)

Notes and References

I don't read a paper with less than fifty annotations. ——Hu Jianmiao

List the importance of notes and references:

△ Can preliminarily judge the level of the paper and the background knowledge level of the author on related subjects;

△ It can preliminarily judge the moral level of the author. References are related to the credibility of the paper and the author's reputation.

article modification

△Is the center prominent?

△Is the structure reasonable?

△Whether the language is fluent

3. Summary

Topic selection is the key to writing a thesis

Materials are the basis for writing a thesis

Opinion is the soul of the essay

Text is the external expression of the thesis

classroom advice

Intensive reading of 30 original texts and 100 abstracts per year

The ancients said: "Words are without words, and action is not far away." In the highly competitive legal industry, writing is an important "weapon" for lawyers and the best display of lawyer talents. Therefore, lawyers should pay attention to eloquence training while Don't neglect the cultivation of writing skills, move your fingers and start writing!